环节四:独立完成写作初稿
教师活动 4
The teacher asks students to finish the
writing task independently in ten
minutes. While writing, the teacher
should walk around the classroom to
observe their writing process.学生活动4
The students should finish their writingtask independently in ten minutes.学生活动3Studentsshouldsttopic、structure、writingtask.活动意图说明
学生要在规定时间内,自主完成初稿写作,尝试使用和内化所学的语言和信息,加深对主题意义的理解。环节五:初稿自评与展示美文(激情演讲)教师活动 5
1. The teacher asks students to do
self-evaluation according to the
checklist.While the students are
evaluating their draft, the teacher will
choose the excellent speeches to present
on the screen and encourage students to
mark their speech. 2. The teacher will give an overall
evaluation on the speeches.
学生活动5
1. Students should evaluate their draft
and mark their speech according to thechecklist. 2. Some students will be invited tomake a speech in front of the class. 3. Other students should give a proper
mark and choose the best one.活动意图说明
学生通过教师提供的评价标准量表,对自己的演讲稿进行多维度的自评,能够发现自己的作文中存在的问题,并进行修改,提升。通过展讲与互评,突出学生在评价中的主体地位.教师基于小组评价意见进行综合评价并提出改进意见,促进学生的发展与成长。教师活动 6
The teacher makes a speech genuinely
学生活动6
Students listen to the teacher carefully,